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Entertainment Writing: OnMilwaukee Article Submission

12/5/2022

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How college students view Meal Prepping
while attending college

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A college student's life is full of variables. Tackling many classes at once to receive numerous assignments requires an abundance of time, energy, and focus. Finding time to do much else can be a big struggle. 
 
It’s an irrefutable fact that we all must eat. The appeal of cooking and or meal prepping becomes muddled, as students may not have the time required to do so. What many people might consider simple, making and preparing meals can often become overwhelming to college students. Ordering food from restaurants and other fast-food establishments becomes an all too appealing option. Unhealthy lifestyle choices then become commonplace. While looking at the issue from a college student’s perspective; one can see the perceptions, expectations, and concerns college students have. 
 
After taking the opportunity to interview a few college students on Meal Prepping, one can start to see the effects being a college student has on their ability to stay healthy via the foods they eat.

Perceptions
Meal Prepping can be very daunting; all the food you must prep and all the planning going into it. The perceptions of college students will kill any attempt to meal prep if they perceive mealprepping negatively.
 
While doing research, I had the opportunity to interview a few college students to receive their input on the matter. One interview, in particular, stood out the most.

“I don’t want to. It’s so much work. I don’t know what to make and how many ingredients I’ll need to make it” (Mr. Lawson).
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The reasons seem all too easy to spot. Convenience! Many would agree that college students face a battle of convenience in their day-to-day. There is no difference when it comes to food. This perception of what Meal Prepping is damaging college students' ability to even want to start Meal Prepping. Meals from Fast Food establishments become evermore enticing. 
 
Expectations
With perceptions come the inevitable expectations college students have when it comes to meal prepping. While perceptions and expectations can be viewed as interchangeable, for this writing, the two have been kept separate in meaning. For college students, expectations are high, not only on the work they produce but from the school's faculty and more importantly themselves. The expectations of one Ms. Johnson revealed further insights into the discussion of meal prepping.
 
“I expect meal prepping to be having to cook every single night. I feel I would have to make
larger meals that last more than one sitting. I only have an hour or so before I must do homework” (Ms. Johnson).  

 
Once again, laid out in front of us, the expectations college students have on meal prepping are clear. The overall expectation that I came across during the interviews was, there is only “one” way to do meal prepping for each individual. What meal prepping means to each student can differ but there is usually only one. I’ve learned that there is more than one way to meal prep. It would appear that college students seem to overlook this, which then leads to confusion and misconceptions.
 
Concerns
If one is to truly understand why college students are preferring to eat out vs cooking at home and meal prep, one must first understand their concerns. 
 
“MONEY. Money adds up over time especially if I’m not sharing costs. How should I properly budget this expense? I would starve rather than spend so much money to eat” (Ms. Lewinsky).
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Their concerns are valid. To keep costs low, one must understand how to budget this expense in the first place. The knowledge of how much different foods cost and how to manage that cost is vital.
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How can we help?
By understanding “college students” needs and concerns, one can start to see what needs to be done. Students need to be better versed in the mundane. How do groceries work? What options do I have? How can I keep my costs down? How can I manage time to better suit me? After the fundamental aspects of food knowledge are attained, implementing tricks to keep to a schedule and plan when it comes to food will be more effective and helpful in the long run. 
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An Interview Profile

9/19/2022

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A Profile: Madison Fox

Madison Fox is a current MIAD Student on the Illustration Major pathway from Plainfield, IL. Her current interests are Fantasy and Concept Illustrating. 

“I started getting into drawing back in middle school. All I would draw are characters from shows and other animated programs.”

Miss. Fox’s creativity in the Illustration Major pathway pushes her to improve her abilities. So far that she landed her first official client, competing with other artists in the Penfield Charity Poster competition.

She wants to work as a Freelance Artist after graduating from MIAD. Her job of choice fall in the Video Game/Animation field working as a fantasy/concept sketcher. 

“I don’t plan on staying in Milwaukee. If I have to work in person, depending on if I can work remotely, I’ll most likely commute to a new location for work.”

Miss. Fox’s initial goal was to work for Disney, but towards the end of her college journey through MAID, her decision has changed. She aims to work for Bioware, a video game development company as one of their concept illustrators. 
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Tone & Voice / Integration Healing

9/16/2022

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Tone & Voice

These buildings were demolished for soulless surface parking spaces

“No matter what the reason is for
demolition, it's still a shame to see a classic cream city brick building replaced with the personality of a parking lot. It removes the three-dimensional history and replaces it with a flat surface that can
​only hold two states: empty or littered” (OnMilwaukee.com). 


A feeling of importance and severity. The feeling of disgust can be distinguished
from the author’s tone of voice. 


“Historic buildings are razed for any number of reasons, some more honorable than others, such as forces of nature, or simply being in the way of a new, exciting project, or — most unfortunately — poor stewardship and decay” (OnMilwaukee.com). 


The diction feels old yet wise. At the
same time, how McDowell uses words, I get
the overall feeling of “grave importance”.
A sense of pure disappointment is based in his tone. “...It’s still a shame to see…”
An interesting design choice for the article specifically is that it’s written on a very dark color background, arguably signifying severity and importance. After reading the article as a whole and the voice of the author, I would argue that he wants us
to be mindful of how we affect our city
spaces. If an idea is good enough to
warrant replacing a building then well,
but if not then leave the structure for others to enjoy.


Integration Healing

Integration Healing addresses mental health through art

The first image pertains to the point of the article. The multiple videos though have no relation to anything in particular. Why are they there? The only connection they have to the article is that they are about Milwaukee. Even that isn’t a connection. 

The second art piece in the article feels more like an analogy to the theme of the article. Painting, a form of self-expression, allows us to delve into our emotions. The necklace in the third image is another great example of self-expression as each piece on the necklace is directly tied to the person who it’s for. 

Looking further down the article we do come to an advertisement that takes up an entire section. The article continues below. Why is this advertisement drawing all the attention away from the article until you scroll past it? This feels like a poor choice of design.

Overall the article does an ok job
getting its message across. However,
some of the media present makes no sense
at all. Either because it has no relation
tothe article or because the media is obstructing the article itself.


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Todd Mrozinski's Voice: Urban Milwaukee

8/29/2022

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Todd Mrozinski's Voice
The Power of Great Paintings

My initial perception of his voice through his art is being light, descriptive, passionate, imaginative, feeling of air; almost poetic. Reading the article, "The Power of Great Paintings" from UrbanMilwaukee, I see more into Mrozinski's voice as a writer. 

Mrozinski’s voice feels like a mirror to his personality. Without knowing him, through his writing I begin to see a person behind these words. His own art, light and fluffy; like watching a breeze blow by, illuminated and soft. His voice is descriptive, passionate, imaginative and light. He writes with his words and not the words of an essay. 

“My heart raced as I showed the attendant my ticket and entered the first gallery of “A Modern Vision: European Masterworks from The Phillips Collection” at the Milwaukee Art Museum.” (UrbanMilwaukee.com) 

This sentence alone paints an entire scene. Mrozinski’s voice is unlike to a childs energy. Full of emotion but more reserved. With this example we get a sense of passion. 

“Through Chardin’s masterful touch and use of soft and hard edges, the still life becomes a landscape. The haziness of the vase contour behind the sharpness of the peach creates space like a distant mountain range on a foggy day.” (UrbanMilwaukee.com)

Mrozinski’s use of diction is striking. His wording is light and effective. The more I read, the more I feel excited for the context he is writing about; almost like I’m going to see the art myself. 

A passionate man writes how he feels. With every sentenceI read I felt the person behind those words. Light, passionate, descriptive, imaginative and more. 


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Articles of Interest: Deep-Dive

8/29/2022

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Goal: To analyze different news websites based on organization, structure, and demographic.
​Additionally, what about the website is and is not working?
​Use the chosen articles as reference.

Insider:
Utah Senate candidate says a man chased and pointed a firearm at him and his wife 'in a threatening way' while driving home from a campaign event

Open, lots of white space, interesting engaging organization. Insider is a
news website with a variety of topics
from around the world. Life, Business,
Politics and Sports are some of the categories covered by Insider. 

​​"Utah Senate candidate says a man chased
​and pointed a firearm at him and his wife
in a threatening way' while driving home
from a campaign event," follows the same organization as the overall website. The spacing lowers the demographic age range to Gen-Z and Millennials. The articles spacing also makes the information easier to read.

Overall a great website for news. Like any website however, making sure you have other sources to confirm information is important. 

TeenVogue:
Taylor Swift Was Almost Cast in the 
Twilight Saga, But She Was Turned Down
By the Director
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TeenVogue, not just for teens. Based on the website and the article, "Taylor Swift Was Almost Cast in the Twilight Saga, But She
Was Turned DownBy the Director," this news website is actually aimed for people in
their teens to late 30s.

Simplicity—the youths aesthetic. The website is simple. Very open even spacing separating articles. Lots of white space everywhere. Each article is accompanied by an image. This is also indicative of a younger demographic. 

The information on the website is sensible
​in its size. I feel like someone is
talking to me when I read this. While this
is not a negative thing, it's not the most professional. This way of writing is being seen more and more by those within the teen to 30s age range. 


OnMilwaukee: ​Identity design enhances customer appeal at BelAir, Dead Bird and more

OnMilwaukee is strictly about Milwaukee hence its name. The "guides" section shows a plethora of eatery options from restaurants to dinking events. This tab tends to be concise and to the point providing as much information as possible without sounding drab. For the food options tends to a wide variety of consumers, comfort food, finer dining, etc… Each Guide is bordered and clearly defined. Captions for the articles on the website lists enough information to gain your attention. There is no other text listed in the article caption to indicate what else the article is about.

While looking through the website, I felt a sense of comfort. The organization, colors and topics is the reason for this. The idea of this website is help promote tourism as well as be functional for the general public who already lives in Milwaukee. The article, "Identity design enhances customer appeal at BelAir, Dead Bird and more", gives information on the topic, yes, but how the information is written helps promote tourism. Talking about other places helps bring attention to them. One mention can send a slew of people. 

Shepherd Express: ​Savory Changes at Bombay Sweets

At first glance, it feels very newsy to me. The "Home Page" is too cluttered. This makes it appear to have little organization. Everything is in your face. The website does have tabs that break down into many categories. Shepherd Express looks very messy, however, it in fact has a lot of organization. It's because there is so much going on that it looks disorganized and unapproachable. 

Taking a deeper look in one of the articles, "Savory Changes at Bombay Sweets", I can see this website aims to an older demographic like Millennials and Gen-X. Typeface choices and color scheme hint at this observation. A lot of serifed fonts with a very heavy use of black and white. All of this hints at physical "Newspaper" productions. While the website may lack apparent structure, the wording isn't as bad. The wording is designed to be concise and informative. It's a little more dry than OnMilwaukee but it's not a complete bore bore to read through.  
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Compared to OnMilwaukee, the length on articles is relatively the same. Shepherd Express is just producing way more content for viewers to read about. Because of this, the organization feels overwhelming no matter how the website labels and catagorizes its content. Personally I would not gravitate towards this source of information about Milwaukee directly.
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UrbanMilwaukee: ​Who Bought MKE Brewing?

Each Article is shown with the same importance and is clearly visible. All articles have vertical organization, equal spacing and font sizes. The contents of UrbanMilwaukee is primarily political. The only exceptions are "Food & Drink" and "Real Estate" tabs. 

While looking at articles, I noticed when you click into some articles, there is very little information on the topic. You'll see a small section but then the rest of the article is a bunch of random information on other articles. The article "Who Bought MKE Brewing?" is a great example of this happening. Any leftover space is used for Ads. 

This is not always the case though as there are other articles that focus more on information. Continuing to look through the articles on the websites, I find the
amount of information to not be consistent. Some topics have loads of information
and some have very little.  

I personally wouldn’t use this as a news source because it’s starting to look like
Ads and Ad revenue are more important than the information for the content they post.
There is very little consistency on how articles are treated. 
Compared to the other
websites, UrbanMilwaukee’s website feels like an afterthought. Because of how they
organize their information, there is a lot of room for Ads. All of the sudden the
website becomes a competition for Advertisers. 
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MilwaukeeMag: ​How to Get the Look of This Cozy Cabin

This news website feels completely different from other competitors. Articles are more image based. There is a sensible amount of information. The information is to the point while not sounding drab. The organization is easy to understand. I don't feel myself getting lost when I'm looking through information. There is a wide variety of tabs to choose from, Culture, Life Style, Eating & Drinking, Events, etc… If I had to guess which age range this website
is aimed towards, I would say 26-35 year olds. The use of typefaces and quantity of images
​in the articles feel younger but seasoned at the same time. 

Looking at the article "How to Get the Look of This Cozy Cabin", there are serifed fonts combined with sans-serif fonts. The sans-serif fonts are bold and stand apart giving the feeling of breathable space. There are multiple images of examples of cabins combined with continued descriptions and information. This makes me think of a younger audience. A heavy use of white space is still used which leans towards an older audience. 

I would go to this website fro information. Images can tell a thousand words. My
generation likes imagery more than text typically. The website feels alive and
like it’s edited regularly.


MilwaukeeRecord: ​Celebrate the life of David Bowie with January 10 screenings of ‘Labyrinth’ and ‘Cat People’ at Avalon Theater and Times Cinema

Information overload! I can't tell what's an Ad and what isn't. The homepage is almost unreadable. The saving grace are the tabs at the top of the website separating categories
of articles. The interesting thing about the articles is that they aren't half bad.

Looking at the article, "Celebrate the life of David Bowie with January 10 screenings
of ‘Labyrinth’ and ‘Cat People’ at Avalon Theater and Times Cinema", there is enough
information without being too long. The titling of the article makes sense along with
the associated imagery. My only gripe with the article is the video link doesn't
work. If I was a tourist looking for information about Milwaukee and saw this website,
I would think the website itself a scam. 
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MilwaukeeCourier: ​Student Loan Debt Relief is a Game Changer

MilwaukeeCourier is primarily an economic and political news website. They have
topics from Welfare to Climate Change to Federal Food Aid.


How each topic is viewed on the website is very structured. Every new article is separated 
evenly with the main article receiving the majority of focus. Compared to other websites,
the articles are heavier on content; not too long but bordering on "I don't wanna finishing the reading". The article, "Student Loan Debt Relief is a Game Changer", I could see these characteristics within its organization and structure. 


I would use this as a source of information but not as my sole use. I would like to
confirm information from others strictly because of potential misinformation and
topic of the reading.


MilwaukeeNNS: ​Post From Community: On Belay – Outdoor Rock Climbing

Some general information about the website, it uses the Milwaukee color pallet, it's
smaller than other websites and is very community based. The organization is a little "weird". 
Unless you hover over wording you wouldn’t know each sentence was a hyperlink
to an article. The o
rganization is cluttered and hard to read because of this. Looking
further, t
here are some categories, but nothing compared to the other websites that
push out lots of information. Content within the articles themselves shows little
imagery and a sensible amount of information.

If we use the article "
Post From Community: On Belay – Outdoor Rock Climbing" from the website, we can see these characteristics. There is one image associated with the article
and what feels more like an announcement rather than an article. The website is certainly unique for doing announcement based information rather than true articles. This separated them from other news websites. This is not a given for the entire website though.

There are other articles with much more information. This information is split into subcategories making it easier to read, understand and digest. This is a very strong design/organizational strategy. Breaking down information helps the reader understand
​what they are reading. 

One thing that is nice about this article is that the writing sounds like there is an actual person behind the words. Other websites are a little more drab with their tones. Because of this, not necessarily bad, I get the impression that this is run by a smaller company with even fewer people. I’m just making assumptions though.

Milwaukee Journal Sentinel: The hummingbirds are leaving Wisconsin for the year. Where are they going? Here’s what we know about their annual migration

Milwaukee Journal Sentinel is what one might consider a traditional news website. Categories 
​of topics are listed into drop-down menus like most websites. 
There are some categories split into 3 article section on the homepage. This acts like a preview into some of the topics mentioned in the categories. Each article feels like they’re treated consistently with equal spacing, article length and tone. The article lengths are longer than other news websites, however, they don't feel too long to read. 

There is one article that stood out to me the most, "The hummingbirds are leaving Wisconsin for the year. Where are they going? Here’s what we know about their annual migration." Within the article, there are multiple sub sections continuing to break down information for easier reader consumption. More and more websites are starting to use this method.

I would go to this for more “heavy” news. My generation likes things broken down more so having articles broken down within them structurally makes sense to us. Makes information easier to look at when it’s explained in steps of need to know knowledge. The one thing
about this website is that after each article, ¾ of the article space is used up by random article headings. There is no reason for why each article is so different. (Lowers the quality of the overall website in my eyes. If you wanted articles at the bottom for more
to read, then having them slightly tailored to the article they are attached to would be better. : shoes and president should not be attached to Mexican culture article.)


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    Samuel Rhymer

    I'm a MIAD CD major looking forward to learning more about the digital side of publication.

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