Molly Snyder & MIAD 2019 Article (Jason Ward's "Industrial Design Student Connects with Great "mecha" Makers")
When reading Jason Ward’s “Industrial Design Student Connects with Great "mecha" Makers” In Is clear that he, much like myself is still new to the format of online writing according to the advice of MollySnyder. When comparing his article to the many notes that she had the first thing that I noticed was that he was not very short and concise in introducing his topic of choice in the article. In his work we see that after his hook, he introduces us to his subject and then the purpose for the article. Looking at Snyder's advice I feel like we should be introduced to the main topic that the article will be exploring and then going to into introducing that two main focus's of the article. Another part of this is that while Ward's article is not one of the longer reads I have had it still manages to seem to drag on longer than I think it should. I feel that after around the first half of the article I dont need to read farther as Ir really doesn't bring more information pertaining directly to the main focus of the article. I also thinks Ward's article has some good points that follow right along with Snyder's advice. Some of these key things that I see are, subheads, hyperlinks and the clear voice that Ward bring through the work.
Jason Ward's Article: https://onmilwaukee.com/articles/miad-series-making-mecha