This article was pretty well-written. I liked that Oli gave the location of the shop and a feel of the area that it's in right away so if viewers get too excited to read the full article and want to just go and find the shop, they're sold. I myself had never heard of this tattoo shop so now I can add it to my radar. There were lots of quotes from the shop's owner which is good - gives them agency. It's great that Oli reiterated that the owner is also a MIAD alum so the article is connecting two different neighborhoods together which fit the theme of OnMilwaukee's platform for tourism. The article overall was a great length and a quick read like this would be a great assist for a shoutout on the radio. (88.9 Radio Milwaukee for example) Oli's voice in their writing was very clear, engaging, and excitable.
Positronic tattoo combines art, community and quality work, Oli Dodd